I was cleaning up a few loose papers from last month’s Big Sur in the Rockies Writer’s Conference and found one more helpful set of notes…
Most of us know the importance of that first page to hook the reader and make them read on. If that occurs, and let’s say an agent or publishing house asks for a full manuscript, what are the top seven reasons for eventually rejecting a story? (These came from a variety of agents, editors, and publishers)
- The character shows no change. The MC is the same on page one as they are on the last page. There must be growth or we won’t care.
- A climax usually has the MC solving the problem they’ve had for the entire book. You will turn off your readers if an adult swoops down and solves the problem for them, making the entire journey a waste of time. Keep the stakes high and let the kid do the work.
- The manuscript is riddled with grammatical and spelling errors. Perfection is not expected but proofreading is.
- You’ve successfully eluded the first three concerns but alas your story idea is not one that would sell in this market.
- Lack of an enduring main character. We should have some attachment with this fictional character we’ve agreed to spend time with.
- The writing is lifeless and it’s difficult to keep focus as the plot plods along.
- Wrong audience, i.e., you labeled this MG but it reads like YA.
If you get rejected there is a chance the powers to be will ask to see it again after rewrites, but don’t count on it. Get it right from the start and you can watch the interest in your work grow.
Have a great weekend!