What Are Kids Reading?

As a writer, it is important to keep up or even be ahead of trends in reading with your target audience. There is no better list than the one put out yearly from Renaissance Learning called What Kids are Reading.

The list is a summary of books read during the 2011-2012 school year. I zeroed in on the results for Grades 3-7, but the list goes all the way up to 12th grade. The top 40 books for girls, boys, and overall ranking are listed. By far Jeff Kinney series Diary of a Wimpy Kid dominates the 3rd-6th grade level. Not as much in seventh grade (though it still appears in the top 10 for eight grade) as Suzanne Collins Hunger Games series takes over. I peaked ahead at the 9-12 list and saw the classics beginning to creep into the top ten.

If you are writing for this age I would encourage you to take a look at the list. The report would also help adult authors whose audience often include high school age. Conclusions for my Middle Level audience:

  1. Novels with a mix of words and images are the most popular. In this busy visual intensive world these kids are growing up in, it’s no surprise.
  2. Humor is important as is action. This is the Always On generation so keeping their interest is an author’s huge undertaking.
  3. Kids like to read up to the next level. Third graders are reading fifth grade level books like the Wimpy Kid series and fifth graders are beginning to look into Young Adult.

As a writer, I take this information  and incorporate what may work in my story telling. I love humor and try and include a surprise laugh in each of my chapters. There is already a glut of image intensive books for middle level as everyone tries to capitalize on the success of Jeff Kinney. Although pictures will be important in the stories I tell, I don’t see myself jumping in any further.

To me it’s more about gripping a reader with the way a story is told. Making them not want to put it down until every plot point is solved. Amen for great writing.

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Quick Editing Tips

If you are on your umpteenth read through of your manuscript, things are looking pretty familiar. You have said what you have wanted to say in the best way possible… or is it? Try these quick editing tips to make sure your writing is in its top form.

1. Random pages. Choose a page in your manuscript from the beginning, middle, and end. Read them separately and see if there is a difference in your writing. Can you strengthen weak descriptions or provide more colorful words so the reader experiences the scene they way you intended?

2. Print it Out. Take any chapter and print it out. Go and sit down with it separately from the device you created it on. I’m amazed at what I find when I have printed words in my hand rather than seeing them on a screen. Does the chapter stand on its own as a mini-story with a beginning and end? Does it move the plot forward?

3. Character Growth. Type a character name in the find box. What page are they introduced? Are each of their scenes providing growth for the character as well as the plot? This works well especially for secondary characters, as you can see their own story by reading just the scenes they are in.

4. Read Aloud. You have been asked to read one chapter at some important writer’s gathering. Pick a chapter and practice. By reading your words out loud you will pick up on messy phrases and words that don’t seem to flow. Change them before your name is called.

A great writer only comes that way by rewriting. Good luck.

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Mount Charleston: A Perfect Setting

I have talked to many authors who say the setting always comes first and then they write a story. For me it was the exact opposite. I crafted a story, and the setting came next.

For many years I made  trips to Las Vegas to teach teachers how to use technology in their classrooms. I would go out on a Friday and return Monday. Monday was always a long day as I got ready to go home. Not much of a gambler and walking the strip is fascinating, but you wouldn’t want a whole day of  it.P1000741

Numerous times I had spotted the mountain range northwest of Las Vegas. After doing some digging I was told the Spring Mountains is what I was looking at. My curiosity made me point the car and head for the hills.P1000313

The drive was amazing with desert to forest in about 40 minutes (with a welcome temperature drop of 20 degrees). As you make the turn toward Mount Charleston, the main peak and the name of its small community, you see an almost empty landscape dotted with unusual Joshua Trees posing in human like stances. They look like guardians with spiky arms flailing about in every direction seemingly ready to defend the residents of Mount Charleston. P1000317

Before long, the landscape changes, replaced by a massive set of hills and mountains wrapping around your vehicle on all sides. P1000318

Next, the thick forest with its large pine and fir trees.  I have arrived and the first sign of life is the charming Resort on Mount Charleston. You can stop for a meal or stay overnight. P1000321

Beyond that are 51 miles of trails from easy to hard. Before taking a hike you can drive down the road a short distance and take in the visitor’s center. Fletcher Canyon is nearby and provides a moderate hike of about 90 minutes round trip.

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I have now made five separate trips to Mount Charleston and find something new every time. Including the setting for my first middle grade novel. It’s a connection I’m glad I waited for.

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Putting Old Books Out to Pasture

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Where do your old books retire? Like good friends, many of them stay with you for a lifetime. All of my recent reads end up on a mantle that faces the kitchen. A high traffic area in my house. They stay there for weeks, sometimes months, or until the mantle fills up. I like passing them each day and reliving the good memories each gave to me, the unique characters I got to know through superb writing.

After that, they often go to a bookshelf in a den, sometimes lent out to friends, donated to schools, or piled high for the next neighborhood garage sale. I keep the ones I hope to revisit some day… when time allows for me to sit back and reflect. It’s just too hard to say goodbye to old friends.

Sure, I’ve gone digital, too. Mostly for the ease it provides in traveling… no more bulky best sellers taking up space in the carry-on. But when I’m home, there’s nothing like the feeling of a good book in my hands and a bookshelf to store them on. My friends for life.

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First Chapter Endings

There is much to be said for a strong beginning to your first chapter. It keeps agents and editors wanting to read more. But what about the final words in that  initial chapter? Often times a writer will start out with a bang, only to lose the reader after the first few pages. How do you keep the interest going and have readers turning the page for chapter two? Here are six possible ways to end a chapter that may do the trick.

1. End with a cliffhanger. Have your protagonist in a don’t turn back perilous situation.

2. Add a new character trait that is so quirky, you have to read on.

3. Introduce a  mysterious or humorous character that demands more reading.

4. End with the scene moving toward a new setting.

5. Conclude the chapter with a dialog question that begs to be answered on the next page.

6. Set-up an action by a character; something that will move the plot forward and provide intrigue.

A less than satisfying ending to your first chapter won’t kill your story if the rest of the first chapter sparkled. A compelling storyline and interesting characters will always win out.  These chapter finishers will only make it stronger.

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You Can’t Make this Stuff Up

I have lived here for my entire life, but Colorado weather is still odd. It has all the elements of a good book: A changing plot, character plans ruined overnight, the deceitful antagonist (Mother Nature or your local weatherman…not sure which) is always lurking. Yep, 80 degrees two days ago and now 7 inches of snow already falling. Seems like a good day to stay at home and do a little writing. photo photo2

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Is a Professional Edit Necessary?

You have written your story, had it critiqued to death, rewritten it in your sleep, and now it seems there is nothing else to do but get it published. Do you plunge forth and hope for the best or take one more step and search out a professional editor? I did the latter and I’m glad I did.

There is an increased number of published authors, present and former editors, and agents who, for a fee, will put your manuscript under the microscope. You can either have them look strictly at plot and characterization, or they can concentrate on line edits to get the grammar and punctuation perfect.

I started researching in hopes of finding an editor who met my criteria:

1. Has experience as an editor in the field. Hopefully with past experiences working with a publisher.

2. Be someone who was familiar with my genre as well as other both above and below my level.

3. Price. I was hoping to find someone who would look through my plotting and character development for $250 or less.

I found dozens of possibilities. Most of the time price kicked them off my list, as my 45,000 words tallied upwards to $1000 for a few of them. I finally settled on the wonderful Bev Katz Rosenbaum (she met all the criteria with flying colors) and it has been a process that is helping move my manuscript to the next level. Bev charged $200 for her BKR Critique. I sent her my manuscript in Word format and a copy of my query letter (She looks at it for free) and settled back to wait for her reply.

Within a week, I was sent three pages of detailed notes about plot and characters (What to cut, confusing elements, chapter length suggestions, and much more). I soaked up every piece of advice and implemented 95%. I enjoy rewriting, so it was not a chore. My manuscript became 40,000 words and is much better focused, moving the plot forward on each page.

Now what? Bev also offers a $100 re-look once you make your changes, and after one more read through, I plan on doing just that. Take a look… no matter what age level you are writing for. I’m sure you will be as pleased as I was.

 

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