THE PAPER COWBOY for Marvelous Middle Grade Monday

This novel has been on my pile of books to read for a long time. It got there like many often do with recommendations from other MMGM regulars. I added THE PAPER COWBOY to my list after seeing Rosi’s shout out on THE WRITE STUFF.

Set in the early 1950’s, 12-year-old Tommy narrates the story about life in a small Illinois town with three sisters and two parents. He’s a 20821303unlikeable protagonist right from the start. Tommy’s an expert at bullying, even doing so to a kid with a disability and an overweight classmate. His words and actions hurt many. I wanted to stop reading at many points, but continued on hoping there was change coming for this troubled boy. We soon find out, his home life is what fuels many of his aggressions. A mother who in modern day would be jailed for her beatings on Tommy, and a father who looks the other way and fails to take full responsibility for his family.

Change does come through with his love of cowboys and western movies, his fear of communism, and friendships he gets while delivering papers. It’s an emotional ride that will eventually have you riding off into the sunset with a smile on your face.

Not only is this a bit hefty in length for an MG book, but it’s too bad historical fiction is tough sell in my world. Young readers want fantasy, humor, and time travel. They most likely could care less about life in 1953. I’ll keep pushing books like this to them not from the historical angle, but that they will learn a lot about what growing up is really about.

PUBLICATION DATE:2014   WORD COUNT: 79,489   LEVEL: 4.1

FULL PLOT (From Amazon):  Though he thinks of himself as a cowboy, Tommy is really a bully.  He’s always playing cruel jokes on classmates or stealing from the store. But Tommy has a reason: life at home is tough. His abusive mother isn’t well; in fact, she may be mentally ill, and his sister, Mary Lou, is in the hospital badly burned from doing a chore it was really Tommy’s turn to do. To make amends, Tommy takes over Mary Lou’s paper route. But the paper route also becomes the perfect way for Tommy to investigate his neighbors after stumbling across a copy of The Daily Worker, a communist newspaper.

Tommy is shocked to learn that one of his neighbors could be a communist, and soon fear of a communist in this tight-knit community takes hold of everyone when Tommy uses the paper to frame a storeowner, Mr. McKenzie. As Mr. McKenzie’s business slowly falls apart and Mary Lou doesn’t seem to get any better, Tommy’s mother’s abuse gets worse causing Tommy’s bullying to spiral out of control.

FIVE THINGS TO LIKE ABOUT: THE PAPER COWBOY by Kristen Levine

  1. You will marvel at how the author ties up the many plot points threading through the story. It’s not a neatly tied bow at the end, but that’s the way life’s problems are sometimes. It’s a beautiful thing when treated with such care as Ms. Levine has done.
  2. The diverse cast of neighbors who provide growth and support for Tommy’s family. A huge reminder to get to know your own neighbors. There’s so much more to them than what you see from across the street.
  3. Life without cell phones or computers is a pleasant reminder how the world used to be. Today’s constant need to be always on was back then a time for talking with family, neighbors, reading, and a variety of outdoor activities.
  4. I’d use this one in a history class with older students learning about the Cold War. There are so many gems of discussion possibilities that fly off the pages.
  5. The author’s notes that this is based on her father’s life. I think other adults may see themselves as one of the characters presented here and in turn understand themselves a little better.

FAVORITE LINES: As we mixed and baked, my thoughts were mixed-up too. I knew communists were bad and evil. I knew they wanted to deny us, and even their own people, freedom of speech. Commies didn’t believe in freedom of religion either. Heck, they didn’t believe in religion at all. The Reds wanted to take all the businesses away from their owners and give them to the government. According to Mr. Sullivan, they might even be planning to drop an atomic bomb on Chicago! So why did I kind of like Mrs. Glazov? What was wrong with me?

AUTHOR QUOTE: “My hope for my readers is that they, much like Tommy in THE PAPER COWBOY, will never stop striving to finds ways to create a supportive community in their own lives.” (Kristin’s website)

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SCHOOL OF CHARM for Marvelous Middle Grade Monday

I doubt I could talk any middle grade boys into picking this one up, but I finally did myself to discover a charming book set in 1977. Yes, especially for any male out there, you really can’t judge a book by its cover (or its title).51XnY5I48fL._SY344_BO1,204,203,200_

Chip makes for one of the most endearing female protagonists ever, telling her story with heart and emotion. She is a square peg trying to fit into a round hole – otherwise known as her family. There is a touch of magic not only at the School of Charm but also in the beautifully written words. Set in North Carolina, it’s a gentle reminder of life in the south almost 40 years ago.

I kept turning the pages anxious for the next surprise. Now I can’t wait for more from this author.

PUBLICATION DATE:2014   WORD COUNT: 58,002   LEVEL: 4.1

FULL PLOT (From Amazon):  Eleven-year-old Chip has always been her daddy’s girl, so when he dies she pins her hopes on winning a beauty pageant to show her family of southern belles that she still belongs. But she’d rather be covered in mud than makeup! Can a rough-and-tumble girl ever become a beauty queen? A universal story about finding your place in the world, School of Charm explores themes of loss, family, and friendship.

FIVE THINGS TO LIKE ABOUT: SCHOOL OF CHARM by Lisa Ann Scott

  1. Change – not only for Chip, but for her mother, a bitter grandmother, and her obnoxious older sister. Talk about a character arc! This one covers every element of character development in a perfect way.
  2. The charm bracelet Chip and her two friends wear is such a great underlying story telling device. Once you have growth in the way you think then a related charm falls off.
  3. So many themes and historical references make this story stand out. Roles of male and females, acceptance of African Americans, first female in space, and the death of Martin Luther King to name a few.
  4. You want a wicked witch? There’s not one here, but instead a horrible antagonist in the form of Chip’s grandmother. You will despise this woman from the get go, but slowly the reasons for her actions surface from a locked room. Luckily for Chip she has another adult in her life that becomes her hero – Miss Vernie, the School of Charm teacher.
  5. Kids who don’t fit in might find hope with this story. Sometimes you have to look in the most unlikely places to find understanding.

FAVORITE LINE: And then I realized what I had to do. The answer had found me, just like Daddy always said answers would. “Just like a lost dog, they’ll show up,” he’d tell me. And my answer was pawing at the door. I would work on the pageant in secret and surprise them all on the day of the competition.

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TIME SQUARE – UFO for Marvelous Middle Grade Monday EXTRA

I’ve once again gotten way ahead on reviews so I’m throwing in an occasional midweek bonus.

Earlier this  year I reviewed the first book in this series TIME SQUARE- THE SHIFT. It’s the set-up for this second book as four time traveling teens take on their first mission to find a person gone missing after an untimely shift in the master clock. In book one we find out the mess-up with our ticks and tocks came about because the father of two of these kids discovered an obelisk not knowing that inside was the home for how time is kept – a place called Time Square. If you jump right in and have not read the first in the series, don’t worry as author, S.W. Lothian, brings you up to date in the first third of this adventure.61Od2AEwzZL._SY344_BO1,204,203,200_

The action focuses mostly on 1947 Roswell, New Mexico where the teens are sent to find and bring back a wayward time traveler. That’s the site of a real life event known as the Roswell UFO Incident. There is also another plot thread set in 1930 Washington D.C. where the obelisk has been stolen by rival Sultan Peppercorn causing some very chilly havoc at Time Square. So far bumbling agent James Blonde has come up empty in his attempts to resolve this situation.

If you like wildly inventive characters, funny dialog, and time travel with a bit of history thrown in, then look no further than the TIME SQUARE series.

PUBLICATION DATE:2014   PAGE COUNT: 214

FULL PLOT (From Amazon):  The effects of the Shift have caused havoc at Time Square. Time itself is in danger of imploding and Operation Slingshot has been activated to save the day. Team ELMR embark on their first mission to locate and rescue the first of the missing travellers.

Mission: ELMR-01
Date: 8-July-1947
Location: Roswell, New Mexico, United States of America

Mission Brief: Readings indicate that the target traveler has possibly been captured by a brilliant, but eccentric, scientist who is investigating reports of extra-terrestrials that have crashed in the Roswell area.

Due to this, it is essential that the target is located and rescued before he unwittingly reveals our secret. If the secret of time-travel is revealed to such a random mind, then it could spell disaster and have a huge impact on the world.
FIVE THINGS TO LIKE ABOUT TIME SQUARE – UFO by S.W. Lothian

  1. A unique utility pen is used to get out of many situations for the teens. You’ll wish it were possible to have one yourself after witnessing all that it can do. Such a great gadget.
  2. A rhino beetle is a character I would never think to put into a story. Neil is there in all his silent beetle glory and will bring more than few grins to your face.
  3. The subtle sense of humor pervasive in every chapter ensures it’s never a scarey ride.  From amusing play on words to some funny dialog exchanges, it’s all tongue in cheek.
  4. Time travel provides an interesting side effect for one of the teens. This twist adds a fun sidelight.
  5. The next mission is already in the works set for the Bermuda Triangle. Looks like a 2016 delivery for this one.

FAVORITE LINES: They clumped together like overcooked rice and edged into the eerie grey beyond the reach of the streetlight, towards the voice.

QUOTE FROM AUTHOR: “I love hearing from my readers.  One of the strangest things about writing is the huge length of time from when you pen the words on the page until the time that a reader engages in the story.  It’s very fulfilling when readers contact me to share their thoughts and questions about my books.” SOURCE

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DIEGO’S DRAGON: DRAGONS OF THE DARK RIFT for Marvelous Middle Grade Monday

Last year I enjoyed the first DIEGO’S DRAGON novel (SPIRITS OF THE SUN). If you somehow missed that first book and delve right into this one, fear not, you won’t be lost. Author, Kevin Gerard, does a nice job of pulling in the original plot points into this one. The stakes are much higher now as young Diego must battle dragons to save the Earth. The fighting is fierce and the story may be best for upper MG. Dragons-of-the-Rift-683x1024

I found this second story in the series even more exciting. The dragons harness the sun for their power, and the leaders each have their own unique personalities. Written in third person, most of the pages center around Diego as he prepares to become a guide for the mightiest dragon. While Diego is learning, many of the in-between chapters have visits to the good and bad dragon worlds. You’ll no doubt be thoroughly engrossed in the proceedings right to the thrilling climax.

The author also did something very cool in naming a few of the prominent dragons. He held a contest at local middle schools to let students come up with the names for the main fiery beasts. Through his preparation and writing the author is in tune with his audience.

If you have a dragon loving reader in your household, give this one a try.

PUBLICATION DATE: 2012   Pages: 203

FULL PLOT (From Amazon):  A Prophecy, an Ancient Calendar, and a Battle for Earth’s Survival. The turning of the 26,000 year cycle is approaching. The fifth sun promises a time of peace for all creatures. Magnifico, Estrella, and the Sol Dragones eagerly await the new age. Vipero hopes to alter the ancient prophecy. He orders the Dragons of the Dark Rift to find and eliminate the Sol Dragones. If they succeed, nothing will stop him from destroying Diego’s world and claiming ownership of Sol, a star with unlimited spiritual power. Diego and Racquel travel with their dragons to the Dark Rift, the entrance to the magical realm known as the Xibalba. Together with the Sol Dragones, they battle Vipero’s immense army in a fight to save or shift the Mayan prediction. The fate of earth depends on victory or defeat, and Diego is the key. His choice – to betray Magnifico or stay true to the Sol Dragones – will determine the outcome of the conflict.

FIVE THINGS TO LIKE ABOUT DIEGO’S DRAGON (Book Two): DRAGONS OF THE DARK RIFT  by Kevin Gerard

  1. If you want diversity in main characters look no further. Diego is Latino and unique protagonist on today’s book shelf. You’ll be cheering for him all the way. Family life is also portrayed authentically with Spanish words and phrases mixed in. I could follow the dialog in context with no problem, but there is a handy two page translation guide at the back of the book.
  2. The shift from Diego playing soccer with his pals to being a guide in the dragon world was a perfect balance and made for an enjoyable connection.
  3. Family. Loving parents and a special bond Diego has with an older brother makes for what seems like a rare story these days with a family intact.
  4. Fire is used in both training and battle. Diego learns to not only shield himself from searing flames but also how to throw balls of fire. That should be enough motivation for reluctant readers to jump right in and read this one.
  5. Several full page illustrations are scattered throughout the story. They add detail and even more excitement to this epic tale.

FAVORITE LINE:

He kept his eyes shut tightly. He didn’t want to see the creature responsible for tearing his classroom to pieces.

AUTHOR QUOTE:

“I started asking teachers and librarians how many middle grade fantasy series are there with a Latino boy hero. Everyone of them said zero and I was just shocked.” (From a television interview with Mr. Gerard)

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THE GIRL IN THE TORCH for Marvelous Middle Grade Monday

What a perfect time with Independence Day on Saturday to present this new novel by Robert Sharenow. If you’re a YA reader his name may sound familiar from his two historical novels, MY MOTHER THE CHEERLEADER and THE BERLIN BOXING CLUB. Robert also has an interesting ‘day’ job as the Executive Vice-President and General Manager of Lifetime and A&E network. And here I thought I was busy! WceGgDUNlCA8RPHOz66AbHHs4RI12Vqg+OoBRGBrKx2plCphEkAr3aizNSRpuGHkIoDZcS4gLRs3LNNbucM2tzHjr1b6gOv!JK2gG4iMspVQ5iDKyCBWtzAWMsmQ+7PK

This new title is all MG and it fits like a warm blanket. The journey 12-year-old Sarah as a Russian immigrant takes will have you glued to the surprising end. It’s a marvelous reminder of what The Statue of Liberty means to so many people. Turn of the century New York City comes to life in world building perfection that will surround you in a marvelous heartwarming ride.

I sometimes hear from the MG age group that historical novels are boring. This one couldn’t be further from that notion and will have readers of all ages wrapped up in this superb piece of storytelling.

PUBLICATION DATE:2015   Pages: 304

FULL PLOT (From Amazon):

The Invention of Hugo Cabret meets True Grit in this heartfelt novel of resilience, hope, and discovering a family where you least expect it, from award-winning author Robert Sharenow.

At the dawn of the twentieth century, thousands of immigrants are arriving in the promised land of New York City. Twelve-year-old Sarah has always dreamed of America, a land of freedom and possibility. In her small village she stares at a postcard of the Statue of Liberty and imagines the Lady beckoning to her. When Sarah and her mother finally journey across the Atlantic, though, tragedy strikes—and Sarah finds herself being sent back before she even sets foot in the country.

Yet just as Sarah is ushered onto the boat that will send her away from the land of her dreams, she makes a life-or-death decision. She daringly jumps off the back of the boat and swims as hard as she can toward the Lady’s island and a new life.

Her leap of faith leads her to an unbelievable hiding place: the Statue of Liberty itself. Now Sarah must find a way to Manhattan while avoiding the night watchman and scavenging enough food to survive. When a surprising ally helps bring her to the city, Sarah finds herself facing new dangers and a life on her own. Will she ever find a true home in America?

FIVE THINGS TO LIKE ABOUT THE GIRL IN THE TORCH by Robert Sharenow

  1. Sarah is a strong, forward thinking young girl. Her presence as a positive female role model is not only welcome but is a main character we can all learn from.
  2. Diversity surrounds the reader especially when Sarah reaches Chinatown. Each of the characters she befriends is a different race and color, but Sarah finds no difference. She only sees them as friends and family.
  3. Her touching friendship with Tommy, an orphan who sells papers on the street. This young newsie is a stark reality to the dancing boys in Disney’s musical.
  4. Short chapters! Teachers are encouraged to read out loud to their students. The problem is finding a book that has chapters short enough to fill the 5-7 minutes of time usually left over for this endeavor. THE GIRL IN THE TORCH has titles for every chapter and each stands on its own, leaving you wanting more.
  5. It’s a humble reminder that on the inside we are all the same, but what we do with our choices on the outside makes us who we really are. Thankfully, the characters here show us what being human is all about.

FAVORITE LINES: Now just a few hundred yards away, the Lady’s face beamed down at them, silent and strong. Sarah’s mother smiled and whispered, “Thank the Lord.”

AUTHOR QUOTE: Ever since I dreamed of becoming a novelist, I’ve wanted to write an immigration story. Both sets of my great-grand parents immigrated to the United States from Czarist Russia, where they lived in segregated Jewish shtetls and were persecuted for their beliefs. For me, their journey to become Americans forms the most powerful and dramatic core of my family history…

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The Path to Publishing: Become Famous First

There are a growing number of actors, talk show hosts, and anyone else who has had more than the standard 15 minutes of fame showing up as authors on the children’s bookshelf.

I would guess their path is a lot easier than those of us going the more traditional route.

  • I doubt any of these fine people ever reviewed children’s books.
  • I doubt they’ve taken the time to read dozens of books on writing, taken classes, or attended writing conferences.
  • Finally, they probably never had to enter a contest to get their work noticed or tirelessly read blogs.

Yeah, I get it. They’re famous and publishers want to sell books. Having a name that people recognize gives the book a jumpstart, along with a prominent place on a store shelf.

614a2j+UDGL._SY344_BO1,204,203,200_My first interest in a famous person’s children’s book came in the late 1980’s. I was watching reruns of The Munsters. Not sure why. Anyway, a short time later I came across a book authored by Fred Gwynne (Herman Munster). It was amusing so I bought it, and I still have the copy. Mr. Gwynne authored numerous children’s books and his talents as an artist showed through in every title.

So suddenly in the past year we’ve had an onslaught of the famous hoping to strike it rich with their own books (and in some cases co-written). Their names are almost as large as the titles. I wish them the best of luck and would love to add them to my TBR list, but I’ve got rewrites, reviews to finish, and a critique group meeting to attend.

 

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HALF A WORLD AWAY for Marvelous Middle Grade Monday

I enjoy MG books where there is a definite arc in the growth and change for a character. HALF A WORLD AWAY not only has that, but you 81XhX39uXrLwill most likely find a change in yourself. Jaden is not a very likeable protagonist and I didn’t take to him right from the start. Thankfully by the end of the story I understood and appreciated this young boy.

Adopted from Romania at age 8, Jaden has never felt connected to his new family. He’s still confused why his birth mother gave him up in the first place. Most of the story is set in Russia where Jaden and his parents go to adopt a new baby boy – a brother Jaden does not want. It’s here the transformation begins and a different side of Jaden cracks through.

Told in close third person from Jaden’s view, the story is sad, hopeful, but in the end one you won’t soon forget.

PUBLICATION DATE:2014   WORD COUNT: 35,552   LEVEL: 4.7

FULL PLOT (From Amazon):  Twelve-year-old Jaden is adopted, and he knows he’s an “epic fail.’ That’s why his family is traveling to Kazakhstan to adopt a new baby—to replace him, he’s sure. And he gets it. He is incapable of stopping his stealing, hoarding, lighting fires, aggressive running, and obsession with electricity. He knows his parents love him, but he feels…nothing.

But when they get to Kazakhstan, it turns out the infant they’ve travelled for has already been adopted, and literally within minutes are faced with having to choose from six other babies. While his parents agonize, Jaden is more interested in the toddlers. One, a little guy named Dimash, spies Jaden and barrels over to him every time he sees him. Jaden finds himself increasingly intrigued by and worried about Dimash. Already three years old and barely able to speak, Dimash will soon age out of the orphanage, and then his life will be as hopeless as Jaden feels now. For the first time in his life, Jaden actually feels something that isn’t pure blinding fury, and there’s no way to control it, or its power.

FIVE THINGS TO LIKE ABOUT: HALF A WORLD AWAY by Cynthia Kadohata

  1. I was only partially aware of the potential horror stories that can come about with an overseas adoption. The author spares no detail but perhaps young readers will need some clarification. I can see this working wonders as a read-aloud giving a chance for discussion of this emotional topic.
  2. Jaden falls in love for the first time. No, not from a first youthful crush, but by bonding with a 3-year-old toddler nobody wants to adopt.
  3. Sam, the Turkish driver, is the first person to rattle Jaden’s perceptions of his life. He’s a perfect older friend who goes out of his way to help Jaden.
  4. Parents who love unconditionally are often absent from MG books. Not so here as Penni and Steve do their best to help Jaden become the greatest person possible.
  5. The book is like a gray, rainy day, but then the sun reappears and you smile. That’s exactly what I did after reading this beautiful story.

FAVORITE LINES: He figured he knew why they were adopting again: They weren’t satisfied with him. Whenever he thought that, he felt tears welling up. He didn’t know if he was upset for himself, because they weren’t satisfied with him, or for the baby, because if the baby was up for adoption, it meant the mother had abandoned him, and Jaden knew what that was like.

AUTHOR QUOTE: “I’m a road hawg! I love to travel around this amazing country. The beautiful landscape, the highways—I love it. Traveling, seeing the country, is one of the things from which I derive my “writing energy.” Just thinking about the American landscape and focusing on it puts me in touch with what I think of as the real, essential me. I have to be in touch with this real, essential me whenever I sit down to write.” (From Cynthia Kadohata’s website)

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THE LEFT BEHINDS for Marvelous Middle Grade Monday

Or rather – THE LEFT BEHINDS: THE iPHONE THAT SAVED GEORGE WASHINGTON. Quite the title for this time travel512-n+uFGVL._SY344_BO1,204,203,200_ adventure. It’s a great way for young and old to discover details about the Revolutionary War, and George’s successful crossing of the Delaware River in horrendous weather.

Narrated by 12-year-old left behind, Mel, he and his two friends are labeled as such since their parents leave them at boarding school during the holidays, too busy in their own lives and careers to share the holidays with their children. Of course things quickly get out of hand and before you know it we’re back in the 1700’s. Both funny and informative, those that love history will adore this book. It’s short chapters (79 total!) would appeal to reluctant readers, but the story becomes a bit too wordy. Fifty thousand words would have been a tighter read.

Anyway, that cover will for sure pull in many readers. Two time periods expertly portrayed. I look forward to the sequel and more history saving adventures from this series.

PUBLICATION DATE:2015   WORD COUNT: 60,959   LEVEL: 4.5

FULL PLOT (From Amazon):  On Christmas Day, Mel finds General George Washington lying dead as a doornail in a stable. But Mel knows that George Washington must cross the Delaware River, or the course of American history will be changed forever.

Could Mel’s iPhone have sent him back in time to 1776? And can Mel and his schoolmates, know-it-all Bev and laid-back Brandon, come to the rescue? Perhaps, with a little help from two colonial kids and Benjamin Franklin himself.

FIVE THINGS TO LIKE ABOUT THE LEFT BEHINDS…. by David Potter

  1. The scene where George is told by young Mel a city was named after him is hilarious. George doesn’t appreciate the D.C. added to his name.
  2. Superb integration of today’s technology with the past. Who else would you go to other than Ben Franklin if you need to recharge your phone?
  3. The app on the iPhone known as itime. Plug in a date and time and you are on your way.
  4. No shortcuts were taken in the research to write this historical novel. You’d learn something no matter what you know about this time period.
  5. A nicely done reference section at the back of the book clue you in to other books, websites, and places you can visit to enrich your knowledge.

FAVORITE LINES: I’d like to start at the beginning–believe me–but the problem is I don’t know when it began and I don’t know when it will end. I only know the middle, which is now, or more specifically ten minutes ago, when someone shot General George Washington stone-cold dead.

AUTHOR QUOTE:”Once in a while I would submit something, and once in a while something was published or a literary agent would work with me, but never much success. Eventually I reconciled myself to my fate. I gave it my best shot, but not everyone gets to play short for the Yanks, dance on Broadway, or get a book published. What are you going to do? Well, I did the only thing to do, which is to keep writing…” (Author’s web site)

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THE TURTLE OF OMAN for Marvelous Middle Grade Monday

Muscat, Oman is an unusual setting for an MG book. A bustling city of 3.6 million, its situated on the shores of the ArabianWceGgDUNlCA8RPHOz66AbHHs4RI12Vqg+OoBRGBrKx2plCphEkAr3aizNSRpuGHkIoDZcS4gLRs3LNNbucM2t1tKmKf8mathkf0cW+Vjk6NQ5iDKyCBWtzAWMsmQ+7PK Sea. The country of Oman borders United Arab Emirates (Dubai), Saudi Arabia, and Yemen. THE TURTLE OF OMAN is a quiet story with a hopeful message about a boy who is relocating to Michigan for three years with his parents. He is hurt by the thought of leaving behind his cat and beloved grandfather and fearful he will not like his new community or school.

A sequel would be welcome as this story covers only the time leading up to young Aref’s flight to the U.S. Like another recent book about moving, MY LIFE IN DIORAMAS, this one explores what a child does to makes sense of a potential move. With short chapters and text that is spaced for easy reading, the page count is not to be feared. It’s a quick read.

PUBLICATION DATE:2014   Pages: 299

FULL PLOT (From Amazon):  Aref Al-Amri does not want to leave Oman. He does not want to leave his elementary school, his friends, or his beloved grandfather, Siddi. He does not want to live in Ann Arbor, Michigan, where his parents will go to graduate school. His mother is desperate for him to pack his suitcase, but he refuses. Finally, she calls Siddi for help. But rather than pack, Aref and Siddi go on a series of adventures. They visit the camp of a thousand stars deep in the desert, they sleep on Siddi’s roof, they fish in the Gulf of Oman and dream about going to India, and they travel to the nature reserve to watch the sea turtles. At each stop, Siddi finds a small stone that he later slips into Aref’s suitcase—mementos of home.

FIVE THINGS TO LIKE ABOUT THE TURTLE OF OMAN by Naomi Shihab Nye

  1. The relationship Aref has with his grandfather is touching. It is Sidi who helps Aref say good-bye to his native land. Boat trips, camping, and enjoying their final days together provides the perfect sendoff.
  2. Aref writes in his notebook so he won’t forget. He writes about the wildlife he adores and any other topic that moves him. His writing pieces are done in a font to reflect his own penmanship.
  3. It doesn’t matter what country you live in – you will recognize the themes of fear, family, and the anxiety of starting over. Aref has feelings similar to young people in our own culture and is a boy who’d be a joy to have in any neighbohood.
  4. It takes the entire book for Aref to pack his suitcase. What he finally takes with him is the basis for this touching story.
  5. Perhaps best as a read-aloud, this tale would be great in a discussion about our perceptions of different cultures.

FAVORITE LINES: Sometimes, even though he was old, Aref walked backwards swinging his arms, making a back-up beep, like a bulldozer or truck would make. You saw differently when you walked backwards… Would he feel backwards in Michigan or just the same as he felt in Oman?

AUTHOR QUOTE: “It is really hard to be lonely very long in a world of words. Even if you don’t have friends somewhere, you still have language, and it will find you and wrap its little syllables around you and suddenly there will be a story to live in.”  Source

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Critiquing Critique Groups

I’ve been a part of a 4-person critique group for several years. We meet once a month and react to one of our manuscripts. The feedback is always positive but also honest with pointed advice as to what would improve a character or scene.

Different versions of my stories got better each time I shared. It’s invaluable to have others read your work. In isolation you often don’t see problems with a scene.

So now as we reach our third summer together my group is disbanding. One person is moving, another who began as a YA writer but now prefers Adult is joining a group of like writers, and the third has decided to take a break from the long road to a successfully published book.

I’m alone again, but not for long.

When I first searched for a critique group almost five years ago there were friends and family who read my first story (okay, maybe it was the second as my first was just for practice). I quickly realized they were not much help. All they could say was something along the lines of “I loved this!” What I needed was how to make it shine, how to raise it up to the next level. I stopped giving them my stories because their feedback was too nice.

Next I did email critiques with two strangers on the east coast. We’d trade a chapter at a time and provided advice. Things went much better with these two people and both are published authors now.

My recent writings have been critiqued to the max, but when I revise it’s always nice to have a friendly voice out there to give critical reaction. I also have more stories in the future that will need outside readers.

I made several connections at the recent BIG SUR conference, and will look to a few of the organizations that already have opportunities for organized groups (SCBWI and CHILDRENS BOOK INSIDER).

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Thank you to my disbanded 4-Writer’s Group.

Thanks for laughing in the right places.

Thanks for making me put more emotion into my writing.

Thanks for telling me outright when something wasn’t working.

 

It’s been a great experience.

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